homework 01.09
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a snowy place or a desert?
Choose between snowy place or desert areas are a difficult.
It feel like choose which one I like better winter or summer.
So, if I choose between the two area, I will choose the snowy place.
Usually, the desert place will be very hot temperature.
And the cold area has a lot of snow.
In my case, I can stand the cold.
On the other hand, I can\'t stand the hot weather.
Maybe the winter season in Korea is not so cold, so I can bearable.
But, If I live in a city called Yakutsk in Russia, I can\'t be able to live.
This city is known as the coldest city in the world.
There the average winter temperature is -40 degrees.
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a snowy place or a desert?
Choose between snowy place or desert areas are a difficult.
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a snowy place or a desert?
Choose between snowy place or desert areas are a difficult.
>> Choosing between a snowy place or a desert is difficult.
It feel like choose which one I like better winter or summer.
>> It feels like choosing which one I like better, if it\'s winter or summer.
So, if I choose between the two area, I will choose the snowy place.
>> So, if I choose between the two areas, I will choose the snowy place.
Usually, the desert place will be very hot temperature.
>> Normally, the temperature in the desert is very high.
And the cold area has a lot of snow.
>> CORRECT!
In my case, I can stand the cold.
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, I can\'t stand the hot weather.
>> CORRECT!
Maybe the winter season in Korea is not so cold, so I can bearable.>> Maybe the winter season in Korea is not so cold, so it\'s bearable.
OR >> Maybe the winter season in Korea is not so cold, so it\'s tolerable.
But, If I live in a city called Yakutsk in Russia, I can\'t be able to live.
>> But, if I live in a city called Yakutsk in Russia, I won\'t be able to live.
This city is known as the coldest city in the world.
>> CORRECT!
There the average winter temperature is -40 degrees.>> The average winter temperature there is -40 degrees.
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