Homework 01/13: FUTURE CAR

2016-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jeny I got a perfect score at yesterday's homework. It was not easy to solve. I first think of word for answering a question and search the words or sentences via internet and answered the question. and Thanks for you to teach how to enhance my vocabulary skills. I will do that : writing definition , using it and translating in Korean. = body = I haven't interested in cars. In the future, I want car running by not oil but water or electric. I know that root cause of Europe and the United States,intervening in the conflict in the Middle East, in fact due to oil. I know electric vehicles are already commercialized stage. and, if I only enter destination place, the car itself drive automatically to that place, automatically identifying the traffic flow and sustaining the vehicle distance, being in compliance with speed limitation and finally parking. in case of that, A driver is no need to handle directly and he/she only need to say where to go.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Oh!!!!
I do hope that you can really enhance your written skills because it is a good way for you to express your thoughts and opinions.
Have a nice day ahead!!!
T. Jeny
 

Friend Jeny

>>correct
I got a perfect score at yesterday\'s homework.

>>I got a perfect score  on my homework yesterday.
It was not easy to solve.

>>correct

I first think of word for answering a question and search the words or sentences via internet and answered the question.

>>I thought of the word first then, searched the words or sentences on the internet and answered the question.
and Thanks for you to teach how to enhance my vocabulary skills.

>>Thank you for teaching me on how to enhance my vocabulary skills.
I will do that : writing definition , using it and translating in Korean.
>>correct
= body =
I haven\'t interested in cars.

>>I have no interest in cars.
In the future, I want car running by not oil but water or electric.

>>In the future, I want to have a car run by water or electricity.
I know that root cause of Europe and the United States,intervening in the conflict in the Middle East, in fact due to oil.

>>I know the root cause why Europe and the United States intervene Middle East, it is because of oil.
I know electric vehicles are already commercialized stage.

>>I know electric vehicles are already on its\' commercialized stage.
and, if I only enter destination place, the car itself drive automatically to that place, automatically identifying the traffic flow and sustaining the vehicle distance, being in compliance with speed limitation and finally parking.

>>If I will enter in my destination, the car itself will drive automatically going to that place. It will also automatically identify the flow of traffic and sustain the distance, in compliance with the speed limitation and finally its\' parking.
in case of that, A driver is no need to handle directly and he/she only need to say where to go.

>>In that case, A driver will not be in control of the steering wheel. He just need to say, where to go.

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