homework 01.19
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you have good or bad experiences with sports at school?
When I was a student, I liked sports subject the most.
It because I don\'t have sports talent, but I like outdoor activities.
So, I only have good memories.
This is a different story, but it was an incident related to school sports uniform.
Among the my school rules, student don\'t allowed to wear sports uniform during other classes.
But, a student bring a sports uniform in English class.
And a native teacher found student\'s uniform and threw the student\'s clothes and textbooks out of the window.
Even, this native teacher didn\'t take a penalty.
Some times I think about this incident, I don\'t understand.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you have good or bad experiences with sports at school?
When I was a student, I liked sports subject the most.
Please answer the question:
Do you have good or bad experiences with sports at school?
When I was a student, I liked sports subject the most.
>> CORRECT!
It because I don\'t have sports talent, but I like outdoor activities.
>> It\'s not because I don\'t have a talent in sports, but because I like outdoor activities.
So, I only have good memories.
>> CORRECT!
This is a different story, but it was an incident related to school sports uniform.>> CORRECT!
Among the my school rules, student don\'t allowed to wear sports uniform during other classes.>> One of the rules in my school is that students are not allowed to wear sports uniforms in other classes.
But, a student bring a sports uniform in English class.
>> But, a student brought a sports uniform in the English class.
And a native teacher found student\'s uniform and threw the student\'s clothes and textbooks out of the window.
>> The native teacher found the student\'s uniform and threw the student\'s clothes and textbooks out of the window.
Even, this native teacher didn\'t take a penalty.
Even, this native teacher didn\'t take a penalty.
>> Even so, this native teacher didn\'t take a penalty.
Some times I think about this incident, I don\'t understand.
>> Sometimes I still think about this incident, and I don\'t understand it.
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