homework 01.22
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How would your life be different if you gain more confidence?
I think, before doing everything confidence is the most important thing.
Fore example, many students make goals for what will to study during the their vacation.
But, I think only a few cases that lead to their plan.
This means many people give up their plans before start their plan.
So, I think these kinds ability to practice or drive a plan is confidence.
If I have a lack of confidence, and timid attitude is ultimately make me a loss and nothing changes on my life.
Other people don\'t help to change my life.
Actually, I know well it\'s not easy to gain more confidence.
However, if I spend today and tomorrow better than yesterday, I think my future will be positive.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How would your life be different if you gain more confidence?
I think, before doing everything, confidence is the most important thing.
Please answer the question:
How would your life be different if you gain more confidence?
I think, before doing everything, confidence is the most important thing.
>> CORRECT!
Fore example, many students make goals for what will to study during the their vacation.
>> For example, many students make goals for what they want to study during their vacation.
But, I think only a few cases that lead to their plan.
>> But, I think only a few people go with their plans.
This means many people give up their plans before start their plan.
>> This means many people give up their original plans and then start a new plan.
So, I think these kinds ability to practice or drive a plan is confidence.
>> So, I think the key to these kinds of abilities is confidence.
If I have a lack of confidence, and timid attitude is ultimately make me a loss and nothing changes on my life.
>> If I lack confidence, then a timid attitude will ultimately make me lose everything and nothing changes in my life.
Other people don\'t help to change my life.
Other people don\'t help to change my life.
>> I don\'t need other people to change my life.
Actually, I know well it\'s not easy to gain more confidence.>> CORRECT!
However, if I spend today and tomorrow better than yesterday, I think my future will be positive.>> CORRECT!
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