Homework 01/27: essay "How long couples should know each other before they get married?"

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I attended call meeting with multi-countries today.

>>I attended a call meeting with multi-countries today.
I payed attention to listen what they are saying, i felt better than previous me  eting.

>>I paid attention to what they were saying, I felt better than the previous meeting.
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I think couples would better meet as long as possible.

>>I think should meet and know each other longer
When they first meet, They generally want to hide their shortcomings.

>>When they met the first time, they would generally hide their shortcomings.
In addition, IF they fall in love, They can not see those each other.

>>In addition, if they are both in love, they can\'t see those things.
When they get married after short-period meeting, Many problems will be occurred sooner and later.

>>During the marriage that is the only time that they will encounter problems.

I have also been seeing those cases by the media and in neighborhood around me.

>>I also have been seeing those cases in media and in my neighborhood.
There are many things to know before marriage, In short, like about character, family, education, job ,responsibility and so on.

>>We should know a lot of things about our partner before getting married. In short, like everything about our partner characterm family, education, job and so on.
But, above all, Love should prevail. Love is all..

>>But above all, Love should prevail. Love is everything about your partner.