Homework 01/28: essay "Good and bad point of SNS?"

Friend Jeny. Thanks for your lesson and comment. I will try to have a confidence anytime , anywhere and any situation. and I will try to get out our potential in speaking the Engish language that I am having. = BODY = 1. Good points of SNS are as below: - Easy to find friends and acquaintances, - Easy to link and expand their personal relationships - Easy to introduce themselves with some profile like photos, ersonal information, hobbies, interests, the personal ability - Easy to communicate with others using E-mail, message, comment, chat, instant messaging 2. Bad points of SNS are as below: SNS always have the bad points on the back of the good point. - It is likely to be exposed to greater personal information and privacy. - It can be derived economic loss from pharming and smishing. - in case of both students and workers, due to the alarm sounded SNS and news stands all the time through a smart phone, It could be difficult to concentrate on studying or working.

Hi there!!!   How are you doing? Let\'s keep smiling.... I already checked your homework so have time to check your corrections. You are doing good so keep it up. I\'ll see you in class and don\'t stop believing in yourself.... Goodbye!!! Teacher Jeny   Friend Jeny.>>correctThanks for your lesson and comment.>>correctI will try to have a confidence anytime , anywhere and any situation.>>I will try to have confidence anytime , anywhere and any situation. and I will try to get out our potential in speaking the Engish language that I am having.>>and I will try to get some potentials in speaking the English language. = BODY = 1. Good points of SNS are as below:>>correct- Easy to find friends and acquaintances, >>correct - Easy to link and expand their personal relationships >>correct - Easy to introduce themselves with some profile like photos, ersonal information, hobbies, interests, the personal ability>>Easy to introduce themselves on their profiles like they can post their photos, personal information, hobbies, interests and personal abilities. - Easy to communicate with others using E-mail, message, comment, chat, instant messaging>>- Easy to communicate with others using E-mail, message, comment and chat. 2. Bad points of SNS are as below:>>correct SNS always have the bad points on the back of the good point. >>SNS always have the bad points on the back of the good point.   - It is likely to be exposed to greater personal information and privacy. >>It can likely expose to greater personal information and privacy. - It can be derived economic loss from pharming and smishing.>>It can derive economic loss from farming and fishing. (What do you mean?) in case of both students and workers, due to the alarm sounded SNS and news stands all the time through a smart phone, It could be difficult to concentrate on studying or working>>In case of students and workers, due to the sound of the SNS and you will receive news alerts all the time. It can be difficult for the student to concentrate with their studies and workers to do their jobs.