Homework(01.29)
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do you think people change their hairstyle from time to time?
-I think it\'s to make a small difference in our daily lives
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chloe! Yes, I agree with you. We all need to make differences in our lives, and changing our hairstyle can be one way to do so. Thank you for doing this homework. ^^
~T. Jenna
I think it\'s to make a small difference in our daily lives.
Correct, or
>> I believe that people change their hairstyles for a variety of reasons, both big and small. Sometimes, it\'s a way to express our unique personalities and experiment with different styles. Other times, it\'s a chance to boost our confidence and feel our best.
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