Homework 01/29: be famous
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강사 첨삭
Hello Oh!
Thank you for expressing your opinion about our topic. I guess being famous entails bigger responsibility as well.
But when I was young I wanted to be a model or a lawyer hehehehe.... I guess, those dreams changed as I got older. I still have dreams that I wanted to achieve these days and it\'s all about for my family and especially for my daughter\'s future.
Although, I\'ve been pondering that I need to have a dream for myself, not to be famous but for my future as well.
T.Jeny
Friend Jeny.
>>correct
It\'s ready Friday while I don\'t feel it.
>>It\'s already Friday and I don\'t feel like it.
Thanks for your encouraging in my no smoking again.
>>Thank for encouraging me not to smoke again.
And Thanks again for your high praise for my class stance.
>>And thanks again for your high praise on our class.
and I will keep in mind today lesson about \"subject-verb-agreement\", and \"Reading books more\".
>>I will keep in mind our lesson today about the \"subject-verb-agreement\", and \"Reading books more\".
I feel that you have been exhausted as housewife, teacher,
>>I can feel tat you are exhausted as a housewife and a teacher.
private lesson-er and office workers for all the week.
>Having private lessons and doing office work for the whole week.
You\'d better take a rest during this weekend.
>>You\'d better take a rest this weekend.
And happily and healthily see you next Monday.
>>Hope you\'ll be happier and healthier next Monday.
= body =
Q: Would you like to be famous ? Why or why not
>>correct
A: No, I don\'t like to be famous so much.
>>correct
I don\'t know by which i would be famous,
>>I don\'t know in which field would I be famous.
as a politician or a artist or writer or what else?
>>As a politician, artist, a writer or others?
I don\'t have confidence to be famous as any part. haha
>>I don\'t have any confidence to be famous in any field. haha
As ordinary man, I am happy now.
>>I am happy being an ordinary man.
>>As an ordinary man, I am happy now.
Jeny, would you like to be famous?, if yes, what kind of part?
>>Jeny,would you like to be famous? If yes, on what field?
Do you do something you wanted to do in your young age?
>>What to you wanted to do when you were young?
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