Homework 01/29: be famous

2016-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jeny. It's ready Friday while I don't feel it. Thanks for your encouraging in my no smoking again. And Thanks again for your high praise for my class stance. and I will keep in mind today lesson about "subject-verb-agreement", and "Reading books more". I feel that you have been exhausted as housewife, teacher, private lesson-er and office workers for all the week. You'd better take a rest during this weekend. And happily and healthily see you next Monday. = body = Q: Would you like to be famous ? Why or why not A: No, I don't like to be famous so much. I don't know by which i would be famous, as a politician or a artist or writer or what else? I don't have confidence to be famous as any part. haha As ordinary man, I am happy now. Jeny, would you like to be famous?, if yes, what kind of part? Do you do something you wanted to do in your young age?

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!

Thank you for expressing your opinion about our topic. I guess being famous entails bigger responsibility as well.

But when I was young I wanted to be a model or a lawyer hehehehe.... I guess, those dreams changed as I got older. I still have dreams that I wanted to achieve these days and it\'s all about for my family and especially for my daughter\'s future.

Although, I\'ve been pondering that I need to have a dream for myself, not to be famous but for my future as well.

T.Jeny

 

Friend Jeny.

>>correct
It\'s ready Friday while I don\'t feel it.

>>It\'s already Friday and I don\'t feel like it.
Thanks for your encouraging in my no smoking again.

>>Thank for encouraging me not to smoke again.
And Thanks again for your high praise for my class stance.

>>And thanks again for your high praise on our class.
and I will keep in mind today lesson about \"subject-verb-agreement\", and \"Reading books more\".

>>I will keep in mind our lesson today about the \"subject-verb-agreement\", and \"Reading books more\".
I feel that you have been exhausted as housewife, teacher,

>>I can feel tat you are exhausted as a housewife and a teacher.
private lesson-er and office workers for all the week.

>Having private lessons and doing office work for the whole week.
You\'d better take a rest during this weekend.

>>You\'d better take a rest this weekend.
And happily and healthily see you next Monday.
>>Hope you\'ll be happier and healthier next Monday.
= body =
Q: Would you like to be famous ? Why or why not

>>correct
A: No, I don\'t like to be famous so much.

>>correct
I don\'t know by which i would be famous,

>>I don\'t know in which field would I be famous.

as a politician or a artist or writer or what else?

>>As a politician, artist, a writer or others?
I don\'t have confidence to be famous as any part. haha

>>I don\'t have any confidence to be famous in any field. haha
As ordinary man, I am happy now.

>>I am happy being an ordinary man.

>>As an ordinary man, I am happy now.
Jeny, would you like to be famous?, if yes, what kind of part?

>>Jeny,would you like to be famous? If yes, on what field?
Do you do something you wanted to do in your young age?

>>What to you wanted to do when you were young?

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