homework 01.31
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer the question:
Why is it important to learn business terms/business words?
Many people has various purposes of learning English.
Among them, good at English skills is a big advantage who English is not their native language in their country.
Because, many companies and businessmen, they look for overseas markets these days.
So, connect or have a meeting with foreigners, we need to English skills and also business terms.
And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korea companies.
Instead, it has changed to be easier for Koreans to pronounce.
Anyway, no matter what company we enter, I think we have to learn business term these days.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Please answer the question:
Why is it important to learn business terms/business words?
Many people has various purposes of learning English.
Why is it important to learn business terms/business words?
Many people has various purposes of learning English.
>> Many people have various purposes of learning English.
OR >> Many people have various reasons for studying English.
Among them, good at English skills is a big advantage who English is not their native language in their country.
>> Among them, being good at English is a big advantage when English is not even a native language in their country.
OR >> >> Among them, having a good English skill is a big advantage when English is not even a native language in their country.
Because, many companies and businessmen, they look for overseas markets these days.
>> CORRECT!
So, connect or have a meeting with foreigners, we need to English skills and also business terms.
>> So, to connect or to have a meeting with foreigners, we need English skills and business terms.
And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korea companies.
>> And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korean companies.
Instead, it has changed to be easier for Koreans to pronounce.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, no matter what company we enter, I think we have to learn business terms these days.>> CORRECT!
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