Homework {02/03}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Anna wants to be a playwright so she studies English and Korean a lot.
2. I want to be a role Mary on the Christmas play.
3. My aunt is an actress and she go to foreign country a lot.
4. Mrs. [Name] is a musical director and she is married. She have three children.
5. When you want to make theater production, you have to write a scenario.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your 2nd composition this week, Clair!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Anna wants to be a playwright so she studies English and Korean a lot.
>> correct~~
2. I want to be a role Mary on the Christmas play.
>> I want to play the role of Mary on the Christmas play.
3. My aunt is an actress and she go to foreign country a lot.
>> My aunt is an actress and she often goes to foreign countries.
4. Mrs. [Name] is a musical director and she is married. She have three children.
>> Mrs. [Name] is a musical director and she is married. She has three children.
>> or: Mrs. [Name] is a musical director. She is married and has three kids.
5. When you want to make theater production, you have to write a scenario.
>> When you want to make a theater production, you have to write a script.
>> or: Theater productions need scripts.
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