Homework 02/03: essay "define happiness"
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Hello Oh!!!
Thank you for your homework... I can say that you are really happy and satisfied with your life.
Happiness will start from ourselves. What\'s inside our hearts can make you happy and sad, so we need to store happy thoughts and positive things inside our hearts so that good things will come out from it.
T. Jeny
Friend Jeny.
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It\'s 9:20 pm and i am in office.
>>It\'s 9:20p.m.and I am still in the office.
I couldn\'t do anything about English like homework, reading English newspaper , checking and practicing what you corrected today.
>>I couldn\'t do anything related to English like doing my homework, reading an English newspaper, practicing and checking the correction that you made in our class today.
See you tomorrow.
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I think happiness start from small thing. it depends on oneself state of mind.
>>I think happiness starts from small things, it depends on a person\'s state of mind.
If i am a rich man, am i happy?. I can not say that it is happier than a poor man.
>>If I will be a rich man, will I be happy? I can\'t say that being rich can make a man happier than a poor man.
Without poor and complaint, when i am delight or joy, joy, or feel extremely fortunate in daily life, It would be happy.
>>I don\'t want to have complaints then it will be a delight and joy on my part. I will be extremely fortunate with my daily activities in life.
In short, My happiness appears from myself.
>>In short, happiness comes from within.
Likewise,Your unhappiness appears from yourself.
>>At the same time people can see if you are unhappy.
How do you think about it, Friend ? haha
>>What do you think about it, friend? hahahah
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