homework 02/08

2011-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Hi donna, It was great to talk with you. As you know, this class is my third. Until last December, I took a lesson with Verna. At that time I had to get an eye surgery and to participate meeting every day. So I couldn’t attend the class continuously. Finally I couldn’t say good bye to Verna. If you are in same office with verna, could you leave my message? I’m so sorry because I should have spoken to her, I was not. and if I have a chance to visit baguio city, I’ll certainly go to see verna and donna.^^ thank you for your time donna, I’ll keep my promise to take a lesson everyday with you.^^ See you tommorrow~bye~

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It’s nice to read this note from you, [이름]. Yes, of course, I can extend your message to Teacher Verna. I’m glad to meet you, too. It’s me, Joanna   Hi donna, >>Hi, Donna (or maybe you mean, Joanna^^)It was great to talk with you. >>It was great talking with you.As you know, this class is my third. Until last December, I took a lesson with Verna. >>As you know, this is my third term to study in this company. It was last Decmber when I took my last lesson with Verna.At that time I had to get an eye surgery and to participate meeting every day. So I couldn’t attend the class continuously. >>Late last year was difficult for me to get into an eye surgery and at the same time taking the lesson everyday. So, I couldn’t attend the calls regularly.Finally I couldn’t say good bye to Verna. If you are in same office with verna, could you leave my message? >>I wasn’t even able to say goodbye to Verna. If you are in the same office, could you extend my message to her?I’m so sorry because I should have spoken to her, I was not. >>Please forgive me for requesting you to do this for me. I should have said goodbye to her personally but I didn’t and I can’t.and if I have a chance to visit baguio city, I’ll certainly go to see verna and donna.^^ If I will have the chance to visit Baguio City, I’ll certainly see Verna and Donna (Joanna).thank you for your time donna, >>Thank you for your time, Donna (Joanna).I’ll keep my promise to take a lesson everyday with you.^^ >>O’ll keepmy promise to take the lesson with you everyday.See you tommorrow~bye~ >>okay >>I’ll talk with you tomorrow. Bye.

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