Homework {02/10}

2021-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. A: Oh! There is a mushroom! We can eat it! B: Wait! It it edible mushroom? 2. We can scan it! Wait... Oh, it is inedible! don\'t eat it! 3. She is my paternal grandmother. She is a math teacher. 4. Do you have maternal grandparents? 5. I like the music \'For the first time in forever\'. It is an OST in Frozen 1.

강사 첨삭


Here\'s your edited homework, Clair! 
Advance happy Lunar New Year! Stay safe!

Cheers,
Jean~~

                   Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. A: Oh! There is a mushroom! We can eat it!
B: Wait! It it edible mushroom?
>> Wait! Is it an edible mushroom? It might be poisonous! 
>> or: Wait! Is that mushroom edible?

2. We can scan it! Wait... Oh, it is inedible! don\'t eat it!
>> We can check/examine it! Wait... Oh, it is inedible! Don\'t eat it!

3. She is my paternal grandmother. She is a math teacher.
>>or: She is my paternal grandmother and is a math teacher.

4. Do you have maternal grandparents?
>>or: Are your maternal grandparents still around?

5. I like the music \'For the first time in forever\'. It is an OST in Frozen 1.
>> I like the music \"For the First Time in Forever\". It is one of the OSTs in Frozen 1.

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