Homework 02/11: Filling in the blanks.

2016-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jeny. I was glad to hear you voice again. You seemed to had a good holiday with your sister, daughter and friends. I also had a so much pleasure with my wife's families. It's like a restarting all things including English. hahaha. Have a nice day. = body = 1. Do you enjoy reading novels? 2. While holidaying in London, Alice acquired a strong British accent. 3. Although tired he was, he played well. 4. As shocked she was, she couldn’t say anything. 5. The door was open, but nobody was inside. 6. The bell has already rung. 7. I can hardly wait until my birthday. 8. There were fewer students in the class than expected.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

Thank you for your homework. Please check the necessary correction that I\'ve made. I know that you are determined to learn new things and there is a big chance for you to improve yourself.... just believe you can!!!

You re also a good student, so stay that way.

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny

 

Friend Jeny.
>>correct
I was glad to hear you voice again.

>>correct
You seemed to had a good holiday with your sister, daughter and friends.

>>It seems that you had a good holiday with your sister, daughter and friends.
I also had a so much pleasure with my wife\'s families.

>>I also had so much pleasure with my wife\'s relatives.
It\'s like a restarting all things including English. hahaha.

>>It\'s like restarting all things including English. hahaha.
Have a nice day.
>>correct

= body =
1. Do you enjoy reading novels?
>>correct
2. While holidaying in London, Alice acquired a strong British accent.
>>correct
3. Although tired he was, he played well.
>>Tired though he was, he played well.
4. As shocked she was, she couldn’t say anything.
>>Shocked as she was, she couldn’t say anything.
5. The door was open, but nobody was inside.
>>correct
6. The bell has already rung.
>>correct
7. I can hardly wait until my birthday.
>>correct
8. There were fewer students in the class than expected.

>>correct

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