homework 02.14
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Please answer the question:
What are the things that make you feel much better after an exhausting day?
I work out in the gym after my tired work.
End the work out, finish the day with a cool drink.
It is the every day same routine. But it doesn\'t give me a sense of stabillity
and stimulation
So, end the day in a good mood.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamillePlease answer the question:
What are the things that make you feel much better after an exhausting day?
I work out in the gym after my tired work.
What are the things that make you feel much better after an exhausting day?
I work out in the gym after my tired work.
>> I work out in the gym after my tiring work.
End the work out, finish the day with a cool drink.
>> After working out, I end the day with a cool drink.
It is the every day same routine.
>> It is my daily routine.
OR >> It is my mundane routine.
But it doesn\'t give me a sense of stabillity
>> But it doesn\'t give me a sense of stability and stimulation.
and stimulation
>> But it doesn\'t give me a sense of stability and stimulation.
So, end the day in a good mood.>> So, I end the day with a good mood.
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