homework 02.15
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Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most important attitude at work?
I think about attitude at work, one of them is manners.
We are doing work we meet staff, consumer and guest.
So, we must have a manner.
Next, sincerity is important for us.
Because, sincerity do not bad affect work.
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Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most important attitude at work?
I think about attitude at work, one of them is manners.
What do you think is the most important attitude at work?
I think about attitude at work, one of them is manners.
>> When I think about attitude at work, one of them that comes to mind is manners.
We are doing work we meet staff, consumer and guest.
>> When we are at work, we meet the staff, consumers, and guests.
So, we must have a manner.
>> So, we must have manners.
Next, sincerity is important for us.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Another important thing for us is sincerity.
Because, sincerity do not bad affect work.
>> That\'s because sincerity doesn\'t have a bad effect on you at work.
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