Homework 02/15: combine

2016-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jeny. Homework today is too difficult but thank you for your good contents. I am very busy now, so see you tomorrow. = body = 1. Unless You start now, you will miss the train. 2. It is too hot to go out. 3. As The weather being fine, We went out for a walk 4. If it may rains, we will get wet. 5. Our team is enough strong to win the match. 6. The students are both clever and hard working too. 7. The more read, the more gain knowledge. 8. Tom was suffering from fever as he could not attend the class 9.The farmers use modern methods of cultivation so that they wish to get a better harvest. 10.After Sita learnt her lessons, she went to bed.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, I am looking for to talk with you. I do hope that we can both do other best in improving your skills in English. Determination and perseverance move the world;thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In spite of difficulties, it could help you know your strength and weaknesses.  T. Jeny Friend Jeny.>>correctHomework today is too difficult but thank you for your good contents. >>The homework for today is too difficult but thank you for the content.I am very busy now, so see you tomorrow. >>I am very busy now, so I will just see you tomorrow. = body = 1. Unless you start now, you will miss the train. >>correct2. It is too hot to go out. >>correct3. As the weather being fine, we went out for a walk >>correct4. If it may rains, we will get wet. >>correct5. Our team is enough strong to win the match.>>Our team is strong enough to win the match. 6. The students are both clever and hard working too. >>correct7. The more read, the more gain knowledge. >>The more you read, the more knowledge you gain.8. Tom was suffering from fever as he could not attend the class >>As Tom was suffering from fever, he could not attend the class.9.The farmers use modern methods of cultivation so that they wish to get a better harvest. >>correct10.After Sita learnt her lessons, she went to bed. >>After learning her lessons, Sita went to bed. / Sita went to bed after she (had) learnt her lessons.

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