homework 02.16
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I think about why think office policies are important?
It is a framework to keep the office moving smoothly
If no office policies, employees are not work.
So, I think there is a need office policy. it\\\'s too hard a regulation
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I think about why think office policies are important?
>> Why do I think office policies are important?
It is a framework to keep the office moving smoothly.
>> CORRECT!
If no office policies, employees are not work.
>> If there are no office policies, employees will not go to work.
So, I think there is a need office policy.
>> So, I think there is a need for office policies.
it\\\'s too hard a regulation
>> It\'s too hard to make a regulation.
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