Homework {02/22}

2021-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. Despite my fear of holes, I like eating hole-shaped pasta. 2. I am now disciplined of my acrophobia. 3. I like Anna and Ji-Min because they are courteous friends. 4. stature in life(??What Did This Mean??) 5. My ring is counterfeit one. But It was so expensive.

강사 첨삭

Hi Clair!

Here\'s your homework!

Cheers,
Jean~~


Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Despite my fear of holes, I like eating hole-shaped pasta.
>> correct [This is a funny one!]

2. I am now disciplined of my acrophobia.
>> I have recovered from my acrophobia. 
>> Disciplined - adjective; showing a controlled form of behavior or way of working; able to carefully control the way that you work, live, or behave, especially to achieve a goal.
>> Example: Clair is quite disciplined when it comes to her studies because she doesn\'t play video games, gets sufficient sleep, and does her homework. 
>> Example: Soldiers are disciplined people since they are well-trained.  

3. I like Anna and Ji-Min because they are courteous friends.
>> or: I\'m friends with Anna and Ji-Min because they are courteous people.

4. stature in life(??What Did This Mean??)
>> Stature in life means a degree of development attained; a level of achievement of a person. 
>> Example: Nobody is above the law, not even a president Park Geun Hye, no matter what their stature in life\". 

5. My ring is counterfeit one. But It was so expensive.
>> My ring is a counterfeit one. But It was so expensive.
>> Although my ring is a counterfeit, it was still very costly. 

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