homework 02-27
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer the question:
Who always provides the things you need?
I am mostly provided with the necessary things from my parents.
That\'s why I spend money use it carefully.
Also, I helped my parents with their work during vacation.
I try to a little more helpful my parents.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
I try to a little more helpful my parents.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Please answer the question:
Who always provides the things you need?
I am mostly provided with the necessary things from my parents.
Who always provides the things you need?
I am mostly provided with the necessary things from my parents.
>> I am mostly provided with the necessary things by my parents.
OR >> My parents have provided most of my necessities.
That\'s why I spend money use it carefully.
>> That\'s why I spend money, I spend it carefully.
Also, I helped my parents with their work during vacation.
>> CORRECT!
>> I try to a be little more helpful to my parents.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.