homework 02.29
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever had to change your diet for health reasons?
Fortunately, I don\'t have health problem yet.
So, I don\'t need to change my diet for my health.
But, always I think I need to eat healthy food for my body.
It\'s because bad eating habit easily occur to disease.
And unexpectedly, we could get sick.
For example, I heard that the Koreans often get \"reflux esophagitis\" these days.
This disease is problem with our esophagus and stomach.
Many people has get this disease, because of the westernization of food and strong-tasting food.
An example of strong-tasting are spicy, salty, oily and sweet.
I heard that if we get this disease, if will be often get sick again, so we need control our diet.
So, we need to diet in order to prevent disease.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever had to change your diet for health reasons?
Fortunately, I don\'t have health problem yet.
Please answer the question:
Have you ever had to change your diet for health reasons?
Fortunately, I don\'t have health problem yet.
>> Fortunately, I don\'t have any health problems yet.
So, I don\'t need to change my diet for my health.
>> CORRECT!
But, always, I think I need to eat healthy food for my body.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because bad eating habit easily occur to disease.
>> It\'s because bad eating habits lead to diseases.
And unexpectedly, we could get sick.
>> CORRECT!
For example, I heard that the Koreans often get \"reflux esophagitis\" these days.>> CORRECT!
This disease is problem with our esophagus and stomach.>> This disease is a problem in our esophagus and stomach.
Many people has get this disease, because of the westernization of food and strong-tasting food.
>> Many people get this disease, because of the westernization of food and strong-tasting food.
An example of strong-tasting are spicy, salty, oily, and sweet.
>> Examples of strong-tasting food are spicy, salty, oily, and sweet.
I heard that if we get this disease, if will be often get sick again, so we need control our diet.
>> I heard that if we get this disease, we will often get sick again, so we need to control our diet.
So, we need to diet in order to prevent disease.
>> So, we need to control our diet in order to prevent these diseases.
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