Homework 02
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
I heard the wagyu beef from one of my students before and he admitted that it\'s the most expensive beef in Japan. You are right! It\'s a mix breed of an American cow and a Japanese native cow. You just made me drool just by reading your composition.^^
See you around!
~Teacher Eunice
-What food have you never eaten but would really like to try?
>> Correct!
The food i would really like to try is Wagyu beef.
>> The food I would really like to try is the Wagyu beef.
Wagyu is one of the Japanese cow species.
>> The Wagyu is one of the Japanese cow species.
OR
>> The wagyu is one of the species of cow in Japan.
I heard that the species called Wagyu was created by mixture between
American Cow and Japanese native cow.
>> I heard that this species is a mix breed of an American cow and a Japanese
native cow.
Wagyu is the best of best grade in beef in Japanese.
>> Wagyu is the best class of beef in Japan.
The price of high-class Wagyu is beyond our imagination.
>> The price of a high-class Wagyu beef is beyond our imagination.
In fact, Wagyu beef is so valuable that it is served as main dish inrecent USA president, Donald Trump\'s visit.
>> In fact, Wagyu beef is so valuable that it was served as the main dish in the recent visit of the USA president Donald Trump.
Due to these things, Eating Wagyu beef is my buckets list.
>> Due to these things, eating Wagyu beef is on my bucket list.
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