Homework {03/01}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I don\'t want to put out the fire.
2. I yield everything to my friends because I am a class president.
3. She is very terrified because there is a lion standing in front of her.
4. I was horrified to see the fire because it was early morning and the fire was very big.
5. I was very scard to see the firefighters.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited composition, Clair!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I don\'t want to put out the fire.
>> correct~~
2. I yield everything to my friends because I am a class president.
>> I yield everything to my classmates because I am the class president.
3. She is very terrified because there is a lion standing in front of her.
>> correct~~
4. I was horrified to see the fire because it was early morning and the fire was very big.
>> I was horrified to see the fire because it was a huge one and it happened early in the morning.
5. I was very scard to see the firefighters.
>> I was very scared but at the same time, I felt relieved to see the firefighters.
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