homework 03.01

2023-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What are the things you provide for your loved ones? The people I love are generally my family and friends. Sometimes I give them birthday gift and anniversary gifts. They also give me presents. Recently I provide for my parents. I went to jeju Island. Cookies sell only Jeju Island were give to my parents as gifts.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the things you provide for your loved ones?

The people I love are generally my family and friends.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I give them birthday gift and anniversary gifts.
>> CORRECT!
They also give me presents.
>> CORRECT!
Recently I provide for my parents.
>> CORRECT!
I went to jeju Island.
>> I went to Jeju Island.
Cookies sell only Jeju Island were give to my parents as gifts.
>> Cookies from Jeju Island were the gifts I gave to my parents.

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