homework 03.03

2023-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Please answer the question: Do you make sure that you always do things on time? I try to be punctual most of time. But I feel awke up too early to work is hard. So I remember to set an alarm on my smart phone. However, Sometimes I start work late because my procrastinate. I think it\'s good to be lazy sometimes. Instead, there should be no harm to others. What comes from procrastinate is reduce stress in the morning. But, I also get a penalty. For example, nagging form my parents, minus points at school and so on...

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Please answer the question:
Do you make sure that you always do things on time?


I try to be punctual most of time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I try my best to always be on time.
But I feel awke up too early to work is hard.
>> But I feel like waking up too early for work is hard.
So I remember to set an alarm on my smart phone.
>> CORRECT!
However, Sometimes I start work late because my procrastinate.
>> However, sometimes I start work late because of my procrastination.
OR >> However, there are times that I start work late because I procrastinate.
I think it\'s good to be lazy sometimes. 
>> CORRECT!
Instead, there should be no harm to others.
>> CORRECT!
What comes from procrastinate is reduce stress in the morning.
>> What I get from procrastination is I\'m able to reduce stress in the morning.
But, I also get a penalty.
>> CORRECT!
For example, nagging form my parents, minus points at school and so on...
>> For example, I receive nagging form my parents, minus points at school, and so on.

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