homework 03.06
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you always do what you have to?
Yes, I thinkg of doing works that I have to do quickly.
If I procrastinate works It\'s makes me mentally a lot of pressure.
And If I do a lot of thing at once, be not productive at work.
Usually after finishing work, I enjoy relaxing.
But my parents don\'t let me rest comfortably.
If I to say I done a works, there are give a new works.
So, I feel regret.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you always do what you have to?
Yes, I thinkg of doing works that I have to do quickly.
Please answer the question:
Do you always do what you have to?
Yes, I thinkg of doing works that I have to do quickly.
>> Yes, I think about doing tasks that I have to do quickly.
If I procrastinate works It\'s makes me mentally a lot of pressure.
>> If I procrastinate works, it makes me mentally pressured.
And If I do a lot of thing at once, be not productive at work.
>> And If I do a lot of thing at once, I may be not productive at work.
Usually after finishing work, I enjoy relaxing.
>> CORRECT!
But my parents don\'t let me rest comfortably.>> CORRECT!
If I to say I done a works, there are give a new works.>> If I say that I\'m done with my tasks, they give me new ones.
So, I feel regret.
>> CORRECT!
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