homework(03.06)

2019-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Since it\'s our first day of class, I would like you to write an introduction of yourself on the composition page in our website. name:violet nickname:vi mommy\'s name:[이름] mi sook (super mum) daddy\'s name:[이름] byung jun (lazy man0 favorite thing:cac(cute animal club),dog,cat,math,art pet:parrot(2X) club rule:1.There is no leader.all are eaqual. 2.always \'one for everyone,all for one.\' I love u :-)

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Thank you for letting me know about these. :)

I hope we will continue to have fun class together. :)


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Since it\'s our first day of class, I would like you to write an introduction of yourself on the composition page in our website.
name:violet
nickname:vi
mommy\'s name:[이름] mi sook (super mum)
daddy\'s name:[이름] byung jun (lazy man0
favorite thing:cac(cute animal club),dog,cat,math,art
pet:parrot(2X)
club rule:

1.There is no leader.all are eaqual.
2.always \'one for everyone,all for one.\'
I love u :-)

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