homework 03.07
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the worst movie you have watched?
I watched the worst movie is the Korean movie \" Bicycle King of Um-Bok-Dong\".
The movie is based on the true story of Um-Bok-dong.
He is a cyclist worked in Korea during the japanese colonial period.
This movie reason why the worst is actor\'s acting skills, boring story and
He is actually a criminal. But, he is not a felon.
The movie showing him as a hero,
The reality is that he has a habit stole a bicycle.
So, he was sentenced to prison.
And the movie failed with a small audience of 170,000.
So, the meme of 170,000 = 1UBD(abbreviation of his name) once popular.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
>> He is a cyclist who worked in Korea during the Japanese colonial period.
This movie reason why the worst is actor\'s acting skills, boring story and
He is actually a criminal.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the worst movie you have watched?
I watched the worst movie is the Korean movie \" Bicycle King of Um-Bok-Dong\".
Please answer the question:
What is the worst movie you have watched?
I watched the worst movie is the Korean movie \" Bicycle King of Um-Bok-Dong\".
>> The worst movie that I have watched is the Korean movie \" Bicycle King of Um-Bok-Dong\".
The movie is based on the true story of Um-Bok-dong.
>> CORRECT!
He is a cyclist worked in Korea during the japanese colonial period.>> He is a cyclist who worked in Korea during the Japanese colonial period.
This movie reason why the worst is actor\'s acting skills, boring story and
He is actually a criminal.
>> The reason why this movie is the worst is because of the actor\'s acting skills, boring story, and he is actually a criminal.
But, he is not a felon.
But, he is not a felon.
>> CORRECT!
The movie showing him as a hero,>> The movie shows that he is a hero.
The reality is that he has a habit stole a bicycle.
>> The reality is that he has a habit of stealing a bicycle.
So, he was sentenced to prison.
>> CORRECT!
And the movie failed with a small audience of 170,000.>> CORRECT!
So, the meme of 170,000 = 1UBD(abbreviation of his name) once popular.
>> CORRECT!
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