homework 03.08

2023-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: When are you usually busy? I think I am busy on weekday This is because I live a normal life like other office workers. These days, I am busy. I wake up early morning then start the works And I have things to do after work too.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
When are you usually busy?

I think I am busy on weekday
>> I think I am busy on weekdays.
This is because I live a normal life like other office workers.
>> CORRECT!
These days, I am busy. 
>> CORRECT!
I wake up early morning then start the works
>> I wake up early morning then start the work.
And I have things to do after work too.
>> CORRECT!

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