homework 03.10
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
My favorite time of my family and friend meeting time is friday or saturday.
The reason is the next day is weekend.
Because, why trying to meeting on the weekend is everyone is busy weekdays.
Also, the time weekday is sort. Because we have to prepare for tomorrow.
So, the weekend is comfortable each other.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
My favorite time of my family and friend meeting time is friday or saturday.
Please answer the question:
When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
My favorite time of my family and friend meeting time is friday or saturday.
>> Fridays and Saturdays are the best time in meeting my friends and family.
The reason is the next day is weekend.
>> CORRECT!
Because, why trying to meeting on the weekend is everyone is busy weekdays.>> The reason why meet on weekends is because everyone is busy on weekdays.
Also, the time weekday is sort.
>> Also, the time on weekdays is short.
Because we have to prepare for tomorrow.
>> That\'s because everyone has to prepare for tomorrow.
So, the weekend is comfortable each other.
>> So, the weekend is the most comfortable time for each other.
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