homework 03.13
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are there some fruits and vegetables that you don\'t eat?
I hate fruits and vegetables are korean melons(Oriental melon) and spices.
The reason I hate korean melons is that not soft,
and there are have too many small seeds and sometimes is smells fishy
The next thing I hate is spices(herb).
In Korea, ther is a food culture of eating meat and vegetables together.
Among the, I hate perilla leaves. As far as I know, Korea is only country
that eat Perilla leaf.
The Perilla leafs are have a lor of hair on the back and have a unique scent.
So, I hate spices(herb).
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are there some fruits and vegetables that you don\'t eat?
I hate fruits and vegetables are korean melons(Oriental melon) and spices.
Please answer the question:
Are there some fruits and vegetables that you don\'t eat?
I hate fruits and vegetables are korean melons(Oriental melon) and spices.
>> The fruits and vegetables that I hate are Korean melons (Oriental melon) and spices.
The reason I hate korean melons is that not soft, and there are have too many small seeds and sometimes is smells fishy
>> The reason why I hate Korean melons is that it\'s not soft, and there are too many small seeds and sometimes it smells fishy.
The next thing I hate is spices (herb).
The next thing I hate is spices (herb).
>> CORRECT!
In Korea, ther is a food culture of eating meat and vegetables together.>> In Korea, there is a food culture of eating meat and vegetables together.
Among the, I hate perilla leaves.
>> Among them, I hate perilla leaves.
As far as I know, Korea is only country
that eat Perilla leaf.
that eat Perilla leaf.
>> As far as I know, Korea is the only country that eats Perilla leaves.
The Perilla leafs are have a lor of hair on the back and have a unique scent.
The Perilla leafs are have a lor of hair on the back and have a unique scent.
>> The Perilla leaves are have a lot of hair at the back and have a unique scent.
So, I hate spices(herb).
>> CORRECT!
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