homework 03.14
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of AI?
The AI technology is every time growing fast.
There are many various kinds of AI, but yesterday I watched an amazing AI.
This is in a broadcasting station in South Korea, the announcer is not a person, this is an AI announcer.
The AI announcer\'s pronunciation and accent still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced AI service in a few years.
Like that, AI\'s advantage are handle work quickly and it can instead people.
But the cons of AI that I think that it\'s not sentiment.
I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence it\'s also include rational love, but in other words, it\'s a warm felling between the people.
In other words, the heart of the machine and AI is cold.
Of course, I think we need to replace AI for easily exposed to danger jobs.
But, I don\'t think machine and AI replace enough mood, feeling, and vacancies in people.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of AI?
The AI technology is every time growing fast.
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of AI?
The AI technology is every time growing fast.
>> The AI technology is growing fast every time.
There are many various kinds of AI, but yesterday I watched an amazing AI.
>> There are various kinds of AI, but yesterday I saw an amazing AI.
OR >> There are many kinds of AI, but yesterday I saw an amazing AI.
This is in a broadcasting station in South Korea, the announcer is not a person, this is an AI announcer.
>> CORRECT!
The AI announcer\'s pronunciation and accent still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced AI service in a few years.
>> The AI announcer\'s pronunciation and accent is still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced by AI service in a few years.
Like that, AI\'s advantage are handle work quickly and it can instead people.
>> Like that, AI\'s advantage is to handle work quickly and it can do it instead of people.
But the cons of AI that I think that it\'s not sentiment.
>> But I think the cons of AI is that it\'s not a sentiment.
I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence it\'s also include rational love, but in other words, it\'s a warm felling between the people.
>> I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence also includes rational love, but in other words, it\'s a warm feeling between and among people.
In other words, the heart of the machine and AI is cold.
>> CORRECT!
Of course, I think we need to replace AI for easily exposed to danger jobs.>> Of course, I think we need to replace AI for peope who are easily exposed to dangerous jobs.
But, I don\'t think machine and AI replace enough mood, feeling, and vacancies in people.
>> CORRECT!
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