Homework {03/15}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Houses are different in sizes. I want to live in a big house.
2. Magnets are different in shapes such as triangle or squar.
3. There are small particles like fine dust in our life.
4. When I go to beach, I usally collect boulders that is colorful.
5. Nonliving things don\'t breath.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited composition, Clair!
Thanks for sending it!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Houses are different in sizes. I want to live in a big house.
>> or: Houses come in different sizes. I want to live in a huge house.
2. Magnets are different in shapes such as triangle or squar.
>> Magnets are different in shapes, such as triangles or squares. [Note the spelling of \'square\' and comma (,) before the word \'such\'.]
3. There are small particles like fine dust in our life.
>> correct
4. When I go to beach, I usally collect boulders that is colorful.
>> When I go to the beach, I usually collect boulders that are colorful. [Note the spelling of \'usually\'.]
5. Nonliving things don\'t breath.
>> Nonliving things don\'t breathe. [\'Breath\' is a noun whereas \'breathe\' is a verb.]
>> or: Nonliving things are not alive.
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