homework 03.15
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What’s the best plan you had (for the weekend)?
My best plans for the weekend is ride a bicycle or exercise early in the morning.
And then I like to rest the at home.
I tend to my plan empty most weekends.
The reason why, I do things that I couldn\'t do on weekdays or
I like to lie in bed all day.
But, my parents also rest on weekends.
So, I can\'t lie in my bed all day. They are wake up me.
Therefore, I try to do anything on the weekend.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What’s the best plan you had (for the weekend)?
My best plans for the weekend is ride a bicycle or exercise early in the morning.
Please answer the question:
What’s the best plan you had (for the weekend)?
My best plans for the weekend is ride a bicycle or exercise early in the morning.
>> My best plan for the weekend is riding a bicycle or exercising early in the morning.
And then I like to rest the at home.
>> Also, I like to rest the at home.
I tend to my plan empty most weekends.
>> I tend to make my plan empty in most weekends.
The reason why, I do things that I couldn\'t do on weekdays or
I like to lie in bed all day.
I like to lie in bed all day.
>> The reason why I do these things is because I couldn\'t do it on weekdays or I like to lie in bed all day.
But, my parents also rest on weekends.
But, my parents also rest on weekends.
>> CORRECT!
So, I can\'t lie in my bed all day. >> CORRECT!
They are wake up me.
>> They wake me up.
Therefore, I try to do anything on the weekend.
>> CORRECT!
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