homework 03.16

2023-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: Should parents help their children plan their future? If a children has a dream to become in the future, I think it is good help their. However, we should make a specific plan that children wants to do andse if child is in a certain state. If child in a state of uncertainty, child give up on the way. So, parents should learn what their want. I think it\'s good to help them make it.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Should parents help their children plan their future?

If a children has a dream to become in the future, I think it is good help their.

>> If children have a dream of what they want to become in the future, I think it is good to help them.

OR >> If a child has a dream of what they want to become in the future, I think it is good to help them.

However, we should make a specific plan that children wants to do andse if child is in a certain state.

>> However, we should make a specific plan about what a child wants to do, and if a child is in a certain state.

If child in a state of uncertainty, child give up on the way.

>> If a child is in a state of uncertainty, the child gives up on the way.

So, parents should learn what their want.

>> So, parents should know what they want.

OR >> So, parents should know what their children want.

I think it\'s good to help them make it.

>> CORRECT!

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