Homework 03.17
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are your short term and long term goals?
My short-term goal is learn to English conversation.
I am good well English conversation and talking to many people
Because I want to learn many thing.
My long - term goal is I working hard and retiring early,
Because, I want to visit other countries, learn the culture of the
Country while traveling.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are your short term and long term goals?
My short-term goal is learn to English conversation.
Please answer the question:
What are your short term and long term goals?
My short-term goal is learn to English conversation.
>> My short-term goal is to learn English through conversations.
I am good well English conversation and talking to many people
Because I want to learn many thing.
Because I want to learn many thing.
>> I am good at having English conversations and talking to many people because I want to learn many things.
My long - term goal is I working hard and retiring early,
>> My long-term goal is to work hard and retire early.
Because, I want to visit other countries, learn the culture of the
Country while traveling.
Country while traveling.
>> That\'s because I want to visit other countries and learn the culture of that country while traveling.
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