homework 03.18
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Among all the countries that you’ve visited so far, which gave you the most lasting/best impression? Why?
When I became an adult, the first place I traveled abroad is Japan.
When I was a student, my friends went abroad and they show off it.
I was felt envious of my friends, so I set a plan to travel abroad.
When I first time went on a Japan trip, I didn\'t know Japanese and English well.
And also, at that time my thought that I only trust the translation application.
But, the abroad trip changed my stubbornness.
Because, I reflect on finish the trip.
Throughout the trip, I felt frustrated with myself.
Because, I can\'t told simple conversation also I couldn\'t speak English.
Therefore, I always relied on translation app.
As a result, If I don\'t have a smartphone, I can\'t do anything.
So, I realized that If I want more fun and more deep trip, learning a language it is too important thing.
I think every when I go where, the trip give me motivation
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
When I became an adult, the first place I traveled abroad is Japan.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Among all the countries that you’ve visited so far, which gave you the most lasting/best impression? Why?
Please answer the question:
Among all the countries that you’ve visited so far, which gave you the most lasting/best impression? Why?
When I became an adult, the first place I traveled abroad is Japan.
>> When I became an adult, the first place I visited when I traveled abroad is Japan.
When I was a student, my friends went abroad and they show off it.
>> When I was a student, my friends went abroad and they showed it off.
I was felt envious of my friends, so I set a plan to travel abroad.
>> I felt envious of my friends, so I set a plan to travel abroad.
OR >> I was envious of my friends, so I set a plan to travel abroad.
When I first time went on a Japan trip, I didn\'t know Japanese and English well.
>> When I first went on a trip to Japan, I couldn\'t speak Japanese and English well.
And also, at that time my thought that I only trust the translation application.
>> And also, at that time, my thought was that I can only trust the translator.
But, the abroad trip changed my stubbornness.
>> But, my trip abroad changed my stubbornness.
Because, I reflect on finish the trip.
>> Because, I made a reflection after my trip.
Throughout the trip, I felt frustrated with myself.
>> CORRECT!
Because, I can\'t told simple conversation also I couldn\'t speak English.>> Because, I can\'t make a simple conversation, and I couldn\'t speak English.
Therefore, I always relied on the translation app.
>> CORRECT!
As a result, if I don\'t have a smartphone, I can\'t do anything.>> CORRECT!
So, I realized that if I want more fun and more deep trip, learning a language it is too important thing.>> So, I realized that if I want a more fun and deeper or meaningful trip, learning a language is an important thing.
I think every when I go where, the trip give me motivation
>> I think whenever or wherever I go, the trip gives me a motivation.
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