homework 03.21
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What beverages would you never try?
I will never beverages a called zico. The reason is it is gave me a big shock.
This beverages cocount water.
When it was released in Korea, there was an event is buy one, get one free
So, I purchase out of curiosity. But, I soon regret it.
The reason is that this drink is a terrible taste.
MY friends also said they never eat.
Even them some reviews say the drink tastes like a rag.
In the end, it did not satisfy the taste of Koreans, so it is discontinued now.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What beverages would you never try?
I will never beverages a called zico.
Please answer the question:
What beverages would you never try?
I will never beverages a called zico.
>> I will never try the beverage called \"Zico\".
The reason is it is gave me a big shock.
>> The reason is that it gives me a big shock.
This beverages cocount water.
>> This beverage is a kind of coconut water.
When it was released in Korea, there was an event is buy one, get one free.
>> When it was released in Korea, there was an event which is buy one, get one free.
So, I purchase out of curiosity.
>> So, I purchased it out of curiosity.
But, I soon regret it.
>> CORRECT!
The reason is that this drink is a terrible taste.
>> The reason is that this drink has a terrible taste.
MY friends also said they never eat.
>> My friends also said that they never drink it.
Even them some reviews say the drink tastes like a rag.
>> Even them some people who left reviews say the drink tastes like a rag.
In the end, it did not satisfy the taste of Koreans, so it is discontinued now.
>> CORRECT!
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