homework 03.23

2023-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What are the things best talked about over a drink? This case is divided into two parts. First is drinking with a friend I met after a long time. Second is drinking with a friend I meet often. The first case , the talking is full, for example, recent stories, news, talking about past, etc. But, the problem is have a friend who I often meet. I met often friends I always know their news well. I get bored quickly because I don\'t have any stories talking about. So they play games in the drinking parties. And then spend time talking meaningless stories

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the things best talked about over a drink?

This case is divided into two parts.

>> CORRECT!

First is drinking with a friend I met after a long time.

>> CORRECT!

Second is drinking with a friend I meet often.

>> CORRECT!

The first case , the talking is full,
for example, recent stories, news, talking about past, etc.

>> For the first case, the conversation is full of stories, like recent stories, news, talking about past, etc.

But, the problem is have a friend who I often meet.

>> But, the problem is when I have a friend who I often meet.

I met often friends I always know their news well.

>> I meet my friends often, so I always know their stories well.

I get bored quickly because I don\'t have any stories talking about.

>> I get bored quickly because I don\'t have any stories to talk about.

So they play games in the drinking parties.

>> CORRECT!

And then spend time talking meaningless stories

>> And then spend time talking about meaningless stories.

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