homework 03.24
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever participated in any competitions?
I tend to avoid competitive competitions.
If competition is very high, pepole looks like always serious and
even hot-tempered.
Anyway, the unique comptition is I participated in
It\'s spacing out(dazed) competition.
Spacing out competition is for a limited time it\'s a ingnores any distractions and
keep the spacing out.
At this time, spacing out competitions are popular in Korea.
In the end, I won first place out of 100 participants in the school
So, I received the winning prize is snacks, and competition points.
It was also a competition, but it was a fun competition without stress.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever participated in any competitions?
I tend to avoid competitive competitions.
Please answer the question:
Have you ever participated in any competitions?
I tend to avoid competitive competitions.
>> CORRECT!
If competition is very high, pepole looks like always serious and
even hot-tempered.
even hot-tempered.
>> If competition is very high, people look like they are always serious and even hot-tempered.
Anyway, the unique comptition is I participated in
It\'s spacing out(dazed) competition.
Anyway, the unique comptition is I participated in
It\'s spacing out(dazed) competition.
>> Anyway, the unique competition I participated in is called spacing out(dazed) competition.
Spacing out competition is for a limited time it\'s a ingnores any distractions and
keep the spacing out.
Spacing out competition is for a limited time it\'s a ingnores any distractions and
keep the spacing out.
>> Spacing out competition is a kind of competition wherein you ignore any distractions and keep spacing out.
At this time, spacing out competitions are popular in Korea.
At this time, spacing out competitions are popular in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
In the end, I won first place out of 100 participants in the school.>> CORRECT!
So, I received the winning prize is snacks, and competition points.
>> So, I received the winning prize which is snacks, and competition points.
It was also a competition, but it was a fun competition without stress.
>> CORRECT!
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