homework 03.27
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are your \"pet peeves\"? (Pet peeves = things that annoy you or make you upset)
What annoys make me is the sudden change in my schedule.
For example, unsheduled thing happen or appointment is cancled.
I\'d rather be canceled.
But, when I am pressed for time, it comes to me a big stress.
Some people think only of themselves, if I refuse their offer,
They say things that hurt my feelings.
So, these things also hurt my feelings.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are your \"pet peeves\"? (Pet peeves = things that annoy you or make you upset)
What annoys make me is the sudden change in my schedule.
Please answer the question:
What are your \"pet peeves\"? (Pet peeves = things that annoy you or make you upset)
What annoys make me is the sudden change in my schedule.
>> What makes me annoyed is the sudden change in my schedule.
OR >> A sudden change in my schedule is my pet peeve.
For example, unsheduled thing happen or appointment is cancled.
>> For example, unscheduled things happen or an appointment is cancelled.
I\'d rather be canceled.
>> I\'d rather have a canceled appointment.
But, when I am pressed for time, it comes to me a big stress.
>> But, when I am pressured at that time, it comes to me as a big stress.
Some people think only of themselves, if I refuse their offer.
>> CORRECT!
They say things that hurt my feelings.>> CORRECT!
So, these things also hurt my feelings.>> CORRECT!
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