homework 03.27
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is worse, natural disasters or manmade disasters (wars, biochemical wastes, etc)?
This question is a difficult for me to choose.
If I choose the worse thing, I think the manmade disasters is worse more natural disasters.
That\'s what I think, except the large scale natural disasters like an earthquake, tsunami and unexpected disasters, I think most natural disasters we can reduce the damage with modern technology.
But, manmade disasters such as wars or accidents caused by lack of technical like a nuclear power plant accident are difficult to reduce damage if it happens.
Unfortunately, I saw the news on yesterday.
This news content is a bridge located in Baltimore-USA, collided with a large ship and the bridge and collapsed.
I think it\'s a really unfortunate accident.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is worse, natural disasters or manmade disasters (wars, biochemical wastes, etc)?
This question is a difficult for me to choose.
Please answer the question:
What do you think is worse, natural disasters or manmade disasters (wars, biochemical wastes, etc)?
This question is a difficult for me to choose.
>> For this question, it\'s difficult for me to choose.
If I choose the worse thing, I think the manmade disasters is worse more natural disasters.
>> If I choose the worse thing, I think the manmade disasters are worse more natural disasters.
That\'s what I think, except the large scale natural disasters like an earthquake, tsunami and unexpected disasters, I think most natural disasters we can reduce the damage with modern technology.
>> That\'s what I think, except for the large scale, natural disasters like earthquakes, tsunamis, and unexpected disasters, I think most natural disasters can reduce the damage with modern technology.
But, manmade disasters such as wars or accidents caused by lack of technical like a nuclear power plant accident are difficult to reduce damage if it happens.
>> But, manmade disasters such as wars or accidents caused by lack of technology like nuclear power plant accidents are difficult to reduce when damages happen.
Unfortunately, I saw the news yesterday.
>> CORRECT!
This news content is a bridge located in Baltimore, USA, collided with a large ship and the bridge collapsed.
>> CORRECT!
I think it\'s a really unfortunate accident.>> CORRECT!
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