Homework (03/28)

2016-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Teacher Charry. Thank you for giving me your daily feedback and for sharing your opinion. I'm glad to read your good opinion. I agree about being a good observer to realize what to do. It is impressive expression. I hope you have a good day. See you again tomorrow :D I think success is subjective. People can make a good result in competitive situation. But, a victory in the competitive situation like match may or may not be a success for individual. Because People have a each different standard of success, I don't think success is the result of being extremely competitive.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! (^_^) A sunny Tuesday to you. How\'s your weather in Korea today? Thank you very much for doing your homework and once again sharing your opinion regarding this matter. I agree with you when you said success is not always a result of being extremely competitive. To be honest, I think the only person we should be in constant competition with should be our own selves. We should strive to be a better person than what we are yesterday. For me, that is the true meaning of success. It is true that people have different perceptions with regards to success. What others see as a form of success may not be necessarily true for you or me. In my opinion, striving hard to be a better person is the true meaning of success. Thank you very much for this composition [이름]. I learned a lot. ^^ I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^_^) Hi, Teacher Charry. >> CORRECT! OR >> Hello, Teacher Charry.Thank you for giving me your daily feedback and for sharing your opinion.>> CORRECT! OR >> Thank you for your daily feedback and for sharing your opinion to me.I\'m glad to read your good opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> I\'m happy to read about your good opinion.I agree about being a good observer to realize what to do. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree to the point that a person has to be a good observer in order to realize what to do. It is impressive expression. >> It is an impressive expression.I hope you have a good day. >> CORRECT! OR >> I hope you have a nice day. See you again tomorrow :D>> CORRECT! OR >> See you tomorrow. I think success is subjective. >> CORRECT! OR >> In my opinion, success is subjective. People can make a good result in competitive situation. >> People can make a good result in a competitive situation.But, a victory in the competitive situation like match may or may not be a success for individual. >> But, a victory in a competitive situation like a match may or may not be a form of success to an individual.Because People have a each different standard of success, I don\'t think success is the result of being extremely competitive. >> Because people have different standards when it comes to success and I don\'t think success is the result of being extremely competitive.

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