Homework 03

Good day [이름]!

Thanks for dropping by the board! I like that you are able to express your opinion about different topics. It goes to show that you can improve yourself even better. This is one of the hot potatoes in the society today but it apparently gives us the right to remain vulnerable to this matter. Keep your ideas flowing!

~Teacher Eunice

-Should kidneys be able to be bought and sold?
>>Correct!
 It is as easy as we might think that we can do anything toward on my body.
>> It is as easy as we might think that we can do everything on our body.
However, almost countries strictly prevent one\'s organs like kidney
>> However, almost all countries are strictly prohibiting people to sell their body organs.
It is debatable whether kidneys be treated as products.
>> It is debatable whether kidneys can be considered as products.
I will illustrate why i disagree with the topic
>> I will illustrate why I disagree with the topic.
>> I will explain why I disagree with this topic.
To begin with, when some parts of our body are traded in the market, fundamental values of human being are devalued.
>> Correct!
This logic can support permission to prostitution and slavery.
>> Correct!
That is a gloomy society that cannot guarantee the minimum right of human being.
>> A gloomy society cannot guarantee the minimum rights of a human being.
The government has a responsible for ensuring human\'s basic right.
>> The government has responsibility for ensuring the human\'s basic rights.
Furthermore, free trade about kidney can make a bigger gap between the rich and the poor.
>> Furthermore, trading kidneys for free can make a bigger gap between the rich and the poor.
The poor cannot help selling their kidney for money.
>> Poor people cannot help but to sell their kidneys for money.
>> Poor people can\'t help but to sell their organs to earn money.
On the other hands, the rich can get good heath from money.
>> On the other hands, rich people can have a good health by the use of their money.
In conclusion, prohibition on kidney trade is needed for healthy society.
>> In conclusion, prohibiting people in trading their kidney is needed for a healthy society.