homework 04.14
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What music genre would you never listen to?
I like most music genres These days, hip hop, R&B, K-pop, foreign music, ect
I usually enjoy listening to music.
But, the genre of music that I don\'t listen to often if Korean ballads.
I feel that Korean ballad music have the same lyrics.
And the lyrics are always sad and about love are never missing.
In addition, there are always a high-pitch part.
So, I don\'t listen to K-ballads. Because I am tired of K-ballads.
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~ T. Camille~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What music genre would you never listen to?
I like most music genres
Please answer the question:
What music genre would you never listen to?
I like most music genres
>> I like most music genre.
These days, hip hop, R&B, K-pop, foreign music, ect
>> These days, I listen to hip hop, R&B, K-pop, foreign music, etc.
OR >> These days, I listen to hip hop, R&B, K-pop, foreign music, and others.
I usually enjoy listening to music.
>> CORRECT!
But, the genre of music that I don\'t listen to often if Korean ballads.
>> CORRECT!
I feel that Korean ballad music have the same lyrics.
I feel that Korean ballad music have the same lyrics.
>> I feel that Korean ballad music has the same lyrics.
And the lyrics are always sad and about love are never missing.
>> Also, the lyrics are always sad and the story of the song is always about love, and that\'s never missing.
In addition, there are always a high-pitch part.
>> CORRECT!
So, I don\'t listen to K-ballads.
So, I don\'t listen to K-ballads.
>> CORRECT!
Because I am tired of K-ballads.
>> That\'s because I am tired of listening to K-ballads.
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