homework 04.15
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How does rain influence fashion and design?
The influence of the weather give affects many things.
Also, the weather affects fashion a lot.
Among them, I\'ll introduce the weather of Britain.
The UK is well known, it rains often country.
It rains and stop several times a day.
But, there rain is not heavy rain such as rain showers.
Instead, there is light rain like a drizzle rain.
So, when I went first time there, I was surprised.
Because, many people don\'t well use umbrellas in the rain.
Instead, I saw them generally enjoy wearing raincoats or waterproof clothes.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How does rain influence fashion and design?
The influence of the weather give affects many things.
Please answer the question:
How does rain influence fashion and design?
The influence of the weather give affects many things.
>> The influence of the weather affects many things.
Also, the weather affects fashion a lot.
>> CORRECT!
Among them, I\'ll introduce the weather of Britain.
>> CORRECT!
The UK is well-known, it rains often country.
>> The UK is well-known, it rains often in this country.
OR >> It often rains in the UK.
It rains and stop several times a day.
>> It rains and eventually stops several times a day.
But, there rain is not heavy rain such as rain showers.
>> But, it doesn\'t rain heavily, just rain showers.
Instead, there is light rain like a drizzle rain.
>> Instead, there is light rain.
OR >> Instead, there is only a drizzle.
So, when I went first time there, I was surprised.
>> So, when I went there for first time, I was surprised.
Because, many people don\'t well use umbrellas in the rain.
>> That\'s because many people don\'t use umbrellas under the rain.
Instead, I saw them generally enjoy wearing raincoats or waterproof clothes.
>> CORRECT!
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