homework 04.17
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most dangerous sport?
I think a dangerous sports is wingsuit.
A sport called wingsuit is one of the extreme sports.
It falls off a high mountin or cliff like a paragliding or hang glider from the sky
It\'s a sports the comes down to the ground.
The reason why I think this exercise dangerous is because the descent speed is so fast.
Their joke is that \"there are the fewest injuries in sport\".
Because the mortality rate is that high.
I will not play scary sports because I want to live long.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most dangerous sport?
I think a dangerous sports is wingsuit.
Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most dangerous sport?
I think a dangerous sports is wingsuit.
>> I think one of the dangerous sports is wingsuit.
A sport called wingsuit is one of the extreme sports.
>> CORRECT!
It falls off a high mountin or cliff like a paragliding or hang glider from the sky
>> It falls off a high mountain or a cliff like paragliding or hang glider from the sky.
It\'s a sports the comes down to the ground.
>> It\'s a kind of sports that lets you come down on the ground.
OR >> It\'s a sport that lets you come down to the ground.
The reason why I think this exercise dangerous is because the descent speed is so fast.
>> The reason why I think this exercise is dangerous, it is because the descent speed is so fast.
Their joke is that \"there are the fewest injuries in sport\".
>> Their joke is that \"they have the fewest injuries in sport\".
Because the mortality rate is that high.
Because the mortality rate is that high.
>> CORRECT!
I will not play scary sports because I want to live long.>> CORRECT!
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