homework 04.17
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What’s the most useful mobile app you have on your device, and why?
I think the most useful mobile app is the map app.
I often use this app when I go to the some place or I check the public transportation time.
When I travel abroad, I usually use the \"Google map\" app.
Because, it has difference from country to country, but it\'s generally well updated.
But, the case of South Korea, it\'s a little different.
Because the \"Google map\" app is not well updated.
As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many function has limit on map apps made in foreign countries.
That\'s why we use a map application made in South Korea.
These apps name are \" Naver map\" and \"Kakao map\".
So, if foreign guest or client come to my country, I recommend the app I just mentioned.
These apps are more useful in my country.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What’s the most useful mobile app you have on your device, and why?
I think the most useful mobile app is the map app.
Please answer the question:
What’s the most useful mobile app you have on your device, and why?
I think the most useful mobile app is the map app.
>> CORRECT!
I often use this app when I go to the some place or I check the public transportation time.
>> I often use this app when I go to some places or when I check the public transportation time.
When I travel abroad, I usually use the \"Google map\" app.
>> CORRECT!
Because, it has difference from country to country, but it\'s generally well updated.>> CORRECT!
But, the case of South Korea, it\'s a little different.>> But, in the case of South Korea, it\'s a little different.
Because, the \"Google map\" app is not well updated.
>> CORRECT!
As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many function has limit on map apps made in foreign countries.>> As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many functions that have a limit on map apps made in foreign countries.
That\'s why we use a map application made in South Korea.
>> CORRECT!
These apps name are \" Naver map\" and \"Kakao map\".>> CORRECT!
So, if foreign guests or clients come to my country, I recommend the app I just mentioned.>> CORRECT!
These apps are more useful in my country.>> CORRECT!
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