homework 04.18
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the things that annoy you when others ask you to do something?
I think I\'m good at doing other people\'s request.
But, when I don\'t want to do it, I refuse.
Most of the they annoy me is because rude.
If who ask a rude, I refuse the job and ignore it.
Other than that, they don\'t say \"thank you\".
It\'s like being rude, but in terms of helping
I feel uncomfortable if nothing happens after the request.
So I always keep my manners when I ask other to do me a favor.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the things that annoy you when others ask you to do something?
I think I\'m good at doing other people\'s request.
Please answer the question:
What are the things that annoy you when others ask you to do something?
I think I\'m good at doing other people\'s request.
>> CORRECT!
But, when I don\'t want to do it, I refuse.
>> CORRECT!
Most of the they annoy me is because rude.
>> Most of them annoy me because they\'re rude.
If who ask a rude, I refuse the job and ignore it.
>> If they ask me in a rude way, I refuse the job and ignore it.
Other than that, they don\'t say \"thank you\".
>> CORRECT!
It\'s like being rude, but in terms of helping.>> CORRECT!
I feel uncomfortable if nothing happens after the request.
>> CORRECT!
So I always keep my manners when I ask other to do me a favor.
>> So I always keep my manners when I ask others to do me a favor.
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