homework 04.19

2023-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: How do you formally invite someone to do something for you? I often I invite someone else when I can\'t do somethings. Forexample, Internet problems, electricity problems, ect,.. I invite them because these things need professional help. Way to they invite is simple. Calling them or using the smartphone app. But one thing to be careful for there are a few bad companies that have recently been diagnosed excess and they are to get more money. So, we have to do some research before who call them.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How do you formally invite someone to do something for you?

I often I invite someone else when I can\'t do somethings.

>> I often invite someone else when I can\'t do some things.

Forexample, Internet problems, electricity problems, ect,..

>> For example, Internet problems, electricity problems, etc.

OR >> For example, Internet problems, electricity problems, and many more.

I invite them because these things need professional help.

>> CORRECT!

Way to they invite is simple.

>> The way of inviting them is simple.

Calling them or using the smartphone app.

>> Calling them or using the smartphone app is one way.

But one thing to be careful for there are a few bad companies that have recently been
diagnosed excess and they are to get more money.

>> But one thing to be careful for is that there are a few bad companies that have recently been diagnosed with excessive gain of money.
So, we have to do some research before who call them.

>> So, we have to do some research before calling them.

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